destruction is imminent

okay, so i turned in one version of the story “self-control” to quercus and then last night one of the people i know who is on the group that picks the stories that will be accepted talked to me online and told me that some people were confused and wanted more information. so i tweaked it a bit more and added more on to the end. i’m not going to post the story twice because very little about the part that was originally posted here was changed. mostly just stuff was added to the end. so i revised it on here as well, and i’m making this post so that you know to check it out again even if you’d already looked at it before. it’s different now! i’m not sure if it’s improved but it is different. and longer. mostly longer.